tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post100077069810880528..comments2023-04-17T01:32:00.068+10:00Comments on Project 365 + 1: #114 Kevin Brophy 'Night'ACskihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01110367021710057605noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-89568906921600509702016-04-29T00:15:36.275+10:002016-04-29T00:15:36.275+10:00It inspired me. Thank you, Kevin.
It inspired me. Thank you, Kevin. <br />Myron Lysenkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07298637356950050153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-17718949095830727402016-04-28T23:53:18.822+10:002016-04-28T23:53:18.822+10:00Another good one...Another good one...Myron Lysenkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07298637356950050153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-17996655209916925832016-04-28T19:06:59.476+10:002016-04-28T19:06:59.476+10:00I really like the resonances the repetitions set ...I really like the resonances the repetitions set up and the hint of a mythic quality that comes out of that. So something feels vaguely unsettled in lines 9-11 which just seems a little out of keeping with your tone in the rest of it. This is not criticism though as you might have intended something else. I really think this is wonderfulchelatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15069108257505719526noreply@blogger.com