tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post1314349624759707683..comments2023-04-17T01:32:00.068+10:00Comments on Project 365 + 1: 9.12.16 (#343) the lull inside a raindrop as it leaves the cloud Myron Lysenko ACskihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01110367021710057605noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-28753309435613962092016-12-11T02:00:14.913+11:002016-12-11T02:00:14.913+11:00Right! The form was familiar but I couldn't pi...Right! The form was familiar but I couldn't pick it. I've never written a pantoum myself. Maybe I should give it a burl.Nathanael O'Reillyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04458387905146803981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-72358069920201237822016-12-10T20:46:27.393+11:002016-12-10T20:46:27.393+11:00incredibly moving, and it builds forcefully. Very ...incredibly moving, and it builds forcefully. Very powerful affect.Efi Hatzimanolishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05353535863228831260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-41352869167824267652016-12-10T14:53:16.655+11:002016-12-10T14:53:16.655+11:00I love this, very rich and full!I love this, very rich and full!MAXIMEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11743918188769186363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-91231740033148200142016-12-10T14:13:05.401+11:002016-12-10T14:13:05.401+11:00Hi Magdalena. Thank you for your wonderful respons...Hi Magdalena. Thank you for your wonderful response to this pantoum. I appreciate it very much. Myron Lysenkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07298637356950050153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-84869977458776997102016-12-10T14:11:42.985+11:002016-12-10T14:11:42.985+11:00Thank you, Nat. It's a pantoum.Thank you, Nat. It's a pantoum. Myron Lysenkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07298637356950050153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-16681268930326019772016-12-10T11:45:02.577+11:002016-12-10T11:45:02.577+11:00I definitely feel the Villanelle - and each line i...I definitely feel the Villanelle - and each line is so rich and full that it seems to gather power with each repetition. This is very moving to me, Myron, for particular reasons, as well as aesthetically. Magdalena Ballhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00182314078304734996noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-6639745616023405992016-12-10T11:12:56.473+11:002016-12-10T11:12:56.473+11:00Great poem, Myron. Shades of a villanelle. Dylan T...Great poem, Myron. Shades of a villanelle. Dylan Thomas would approve.Nathanael O'Reillyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04458387905146803981noreply@blogger.com