tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post6096040150363564906..comments2023-04-17T01:32:00.068+10:00Comments on Project 365 + 1: Kerri Shying R # 180 - Heat hate heat hatersACskihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01110367021710057605noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-38262812513000989772017-01-13T20:27:24.700+11:002017-01-13T20:27:24.700+11:00yes it does kind of jump - I will take that and pu...yes it does kind of jump - I will take that and put it in the retool basket - thanks Béatrice. I think I am mingling tones too much at times, not stopping at the end to reflect upon the piece as a whole. What do you think?Kerri Shying Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04359649587927589065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-85365303837522204402017-01-13T06:34:46.680+11:002017-01-13T06:34:46.680+11:00the four first stanzas are great! (I'm less ha...the four first stanzas are great! (I'm less happy with the end)Béatrice MACHEThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07296584755071209068noreply@blogger.com