tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post6981392446791768361..comments2023-04-17T01:32:00.068+10:00Comments on Project 365 + 1: Kristen de Kline #67 - neon pink skiesACskihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01110367021710057605noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-90819098554160257832017-03-07T09:29:58.040+11:002017-03-07T09:29:58.040+11:00Great Rob - thanks for the feedback. Yes you'r...Great Rob - thanks for the feedback. Yes you're right about ditching the last stanza - it doesn't need it it - and not needing the emphasis of the capitals. I'll change it! Enjoy your crazy comfortable cosy box! Cheers Kristen:)Kristen de Klinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02093491588618201054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-61587729314235884542017-03-07T02:09:16.329+11:002017-03-07T02:09:16.329+11:00Dear Kristen, only 2 things and then I'll shut...Dear Kristen, only 2 things and then I'll shut up. Promise! First one is, I don't think tin man & chainsmoker need any capitals; second one is, it's such a fine poem as is, ditch the last stanza...cos yer jes talkin to yerself! It's already cooked. Back in my box. Cozy. Comfortable. Crazy. Quiet as a cat.Rob Schacknehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09820621386743394312noreply@blogger.com