tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post7111334320995125883..comments2023-04-17T01:32:00.068+10:00Comments on Project 365 + 1: Kerri Shying R - # 188 - Give me FeverACskihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01110367021710057605noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-44759519863852645752017-02-06T00:26:55.218+11:002017-02-06T00:26:55.218+11:00No. Sunday/Monday etc goes very well at the very s...No. Sunday/Monday etc goes very well at the very start, dear Kerri. :)Rob Schacknehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09820621386743394312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-46319578080448065002017-02-05T05:04:50.702+11:002017-02-05T05:04:50.702+11:00My dears I have changed it as I think I noodled of...My dears I have changed it as I think I noodled off.....Kerri Shying Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04359649587927589065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-22532798027593786982017-02-05T04:36:31.742+11:002017-02-05T04:36:31.742+11:00I agree with Claine! I thought it was to bad not t...I agree with Claine! I thought it was to bad not to end with the bodies! But thanks for this poem and the images and the complete change of scenery ( I'm bang in the middle of rural Tennessee at the moment!) and the reflexion about what's at stake here. (And stingrays are so marvelous creatures!) Béatrice MACHEThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07296584755071209068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-81255333881215014942017-02-04T19:32:15.829+11:002017-02-04T19:32:15.829+11:00you could well be right. you could well be right. Kerri Shying Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04359649587927589065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-4456194153776278912017-02-04T17:23:04.035+11:002017-02-04T17:23:04.035+11:00I love this poem but I wanted it to end with the w...I love this poem but I wanted it to end with the word 'bodies'Claine Keilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13578100260457042870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-63952129643224791112017-02-04T17:22:42.021+11:002017-02-04T17:22:42.021+11:00I think there is more in this Narooma cycle Kit, o...I think there is more in this Narooma cycle Kit, oh I may pinch your suggestion btw is that ok? <br /><br />The civilised Zombies I think I have written them already. I decided to post it and not stew on it. It is part of the Cosy Camp cycle. Goodness, how things come at you from strange directions, don't they?Kerri Shying Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04359649587927589065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7361304586075259487.post-49734728590717657992017-02-04T16:31:26.378+11:002017-02-04T16:31:26.378+11:00see you there
all dead in a patterned grid
but... see you there<br />all dead in a patterned grid <br /><br />but I read<br /><br /> see you there<br />all dead in a patterned grief<br /><br /><br />there's so much happening here <br /><br />it's like ten poems in one <br /><br />but I want to meet the civilised zombies <br />- the ones who've given up on the machine Kit Kelenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01039514155142268468noreply@blogger.com