sad and lovely feelings :) I really like how you establish this sense of being in the relentless grip of time, and then follow this with the unsentimental final lines where the simple instruction on reflection quietly refocuses all the scattered energies and forces....
sad and lovely feelings :) I really like how you establish this sense of being in the relentless grip of time, and then follow this with the unsentimental final lines where the simple instruction on reflection quietly refocuses all the scattered energies and forces....
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