Sunday, June 12, 2016

12.6.16 (#162) a by Myron Lysenko

star 
blinks
under 
the 
half 
moon
my 
dead 
mother

6 comments:

  1. Effective and touching. The vertical one-word-per-line works well here, illustrative of what you say.

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    1. Thank you, Rosemary. I hardly ever use the vertical line; glad it worked here.

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  2. yes, powerful... falling slowly and heavily into earth from the heavens above

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    1. Ta, Efi. I like the way you phrase your comments.

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