it’s climbing uphill
in ladders of light the limbs of eucalypts
running skyward
from base to crown
under-licking leaves
with its soft tongue
trawling daylight
in its slipstream
morning returns
in ladders of light what night has stolen
daubs blue through
the canopy eyeleting
a patchwork of
denseness overlaid
with the promise
of this one day
the wind tosses
in ladders of lightfrom leaf to leaf
playing catch me if you can
Oh, lovely! Beautiful use of repetition.
ReplyDeleteI started to play with the line when a copy and paste repeated it. After I'd posted though I realised I'd rather have the repeat line as the penultimate one. Always a work in progress...
DeleteAnd such a beautiful phrase: "ladders of light" The alliteration really gives it grace.
ReplyDeleteThank you Lisa, that is where the poem began!
Deletebeautiful, Gail
ReplyDeleteThank you Efi.
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