and how did the storm treat you
sheets lit
sky bright
skin electric
took me up
gave a good thrashing
hung me out strung
among the stars
how did the ground reply
grass leant
back to let it
in happy for the return
of wild
familiar wind hurl of rain
slid like syrup down
soft blades
to earth
were you hungry in the cold
not cold
warm air wet every
pore swam and i gave it
salt my skin its own sky
my tongue
full with the landscape of night
hunger only for more
was it deafening
all i could hear
was everything
flicked and billowed out
crowds of spirit answerings
there for the listener
in time with always
was the room big enough
storm treats as it pleases
and what lush treat it is
you wonder at the space an altar
inhabits hear this
the gods laughed when you said that
thunder has no walls
that last stanza is a powerful poem in its own right ...
ReplyDeleteand two good titles in there
thunder has no walls
lush treat it is
...
just sayin
I like it all
ReplyDeleteCracking good Swainiac. X
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