Good one, Efi. Do you see this as a haiku?
Yes, but only after I wrote it, Myron! I'm dropping my syllable counts (which don't always work for me) and just going with the rhythms of English now. I think that helps me focus more on nature, too.
love the restless clouds
last line says it all!
I am still struggling with haiku can use any pointers but reading these the best.
I love the way this text works
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