Friday, September 30, 2016

Efi Hatzimanolis #213 morning

day starts in
restless exchange
cloud slides under cloud

6 comments:

  1. Good one, Efi. Do you see this as a haiku?

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  2. Yes, but only after I wrote it, Myron! I'm dropping my syllable counts (which don't always work for me) and just going with the rhythms of English now. I think that helps me focus more on nature, too.

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  3. I am still struggling with haiku can use any pointers but reading these the best.

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  4. I love the way this text works

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