Good one, Efi. Do you see this as a haiku?
Yes, but only after I wrote it, Myron! I'm dropping my syllable counts (which don't always work for me) and just going with the rhythms of English now. I think that helps me focus more on nature, too.
love the restless clouds
last line says it all!
I am still struggling with haiku can use any pointers but reading these the best.
I love the way this text works
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Good one, Efi. Do you see this as a haiku?
ReplyDeleteYes, but only after I wrote it, Myron! I'm dropping my syllable counts (which don't always work for me) and just going with the rhythms of English now. I think that helps me focus more on nature, too.
ReplyDeletelove the restless clouds
ReplyDeletelast line says it all!
ReplyDeleteI am still struggling with haiku can use any pointers but reading these the best.
ReplyDeleteI love the way this text works
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