750
(two versions of the
garden at night)
1
night at the garden 
hats
off 
perfect
bird
abandoned
lush
in little distances 
invisible,
all edge 
after
the all-day drought 
tidy
where I've seen to 
cool
underfoot by path 
towering,
the forest left 
much
taller for the dark 
all
of day but us abed 
most
of night too shy to show 
which
frogs are for this chorus? 
leaves
lap at the falling dew
then
how indoors looms above 
bright,
as in a book 
past
the light 
a
zoo of doing 
circus
for
the fairy camp
hats
off 
come
cloudless
float
in the stars
for
this 
night
at the garden 
2
the garden at night 
cool
underfoot by path 
tidy
where I've seen to 
after
the all-day drought 
lush
in little distances 
best
invisible to edge 
all
of day but us abed 
and
towering,
the forest left 
much
taller for the dark 
then
how indoors looms above 
bright,
as in a book 
most
of night too shy to show 
leaves
lap falling dew
past
light 
a
zoo of doing 
and
chorus for the frogs 
hats
off 
come
cloudless
float
in the stars
for
the garden 
at
night 
for
this 
 
Like 'em both. But for me the first one has the edge :)
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