750
(two versions of the
garden at night)
1
night at the garden
hats
off
perfect
bird
abandoned
lush
in little distances
invisible,
all edge
after
the all-day drought
tidy
where I've seen to
cool
underfoot by path
towering,
the forest left
much
taller for the dark
all
of day but us abed
most
of night too shy to show
which
frogs are for this chorus?
leaves
lap at the falling dew
then
how indoors looms above
bright,
as in a book
past
the light
a
zoo of doing
circus
for
the fairy camp
hats
off
come
cloudless
float
in the stars
for
this
night
at the garden
2
the garden at night
cool
underfoot by path
tidy
where I've seen to
after
the all-day drought
lush
in little distances
best
invisible to edge
all
of day but us abed
and
towering,
the forest left
much
taller for the dark
then
how indoors looms above
bright,
as in a book
most
of night too shy to show
leaves
lap falling dew
past
light
a
zoo of doing
and
chorus for the frogs
hats
off
come
cloudless
float
in the stars
for
the garden
at
night
for
this
Like 'em both. But for me the first one has the edge :)
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