Saturday, October 1, 2016

James Walton #29 A Wonthaggi Coal Miner's Daughter Says




see that’s a hog deer print
pointing holding in a slight crouch
going down to the falls
in a hardwood plantation
how can I tell her
that no tracking can save us
there is this little while
of a freedom seen in nesting birds
or that cray sliding away
off a banking crest to deeper clime
standing up holstering her safety on
puts a finger to a lip then mine
hand against my mansplaining chest
says she doesn’t follow to shoot
but likes to know where things are heading



3 comments:

  1. How graciously the speaker gives way to a different intelligence. Tracking to know. A fine poem.

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  2. Extra love for this one, all there, not one word wasted

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