Monday, October 17, 2016

Mikaela Castledine #285 Just Joshing

Every time I go to the sea the moon comes up
rascally round and bewhiskered
he likes the looking of himself
in the mirrored pieces
with the funhouse enlargements
he monsters around
and gives us all the yips
off he goes then laughing into the sky
hehehe just joshing


  1. I like this, but personally I think the last line is redundant (though keep the title).

  2. Terrific personification - so imaginative. I think it works either way myself :) Qute like that giving of voice.


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