Wednesday, December 12, 2018

Rob Schackne #827 - Senryu (3)


the train will shudder
I want it to turn hard left
it brakes on the bridge


7 comments:

  1. Brakes on the bridge, you're suspended in wait, the pause before the curve (the loco equivalent to the calm before the storm?)
    and what waits around, when you reach there?

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    1. All good questions, Gillian. What's that turn...and whether 'brakes' means stop or slow down.

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  2. no tickets these days
    to spell out a destination?

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    1. feel our way
      by shudders
      the tickets
      provide no clue

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  3. once again, Rob
    just have to say
    you want it to turn the other way?
    get yr own train

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