they
contradict one another
these voices
weaving repeating
who is it?
who are
they?
you don't
know where
you are
going
and this
train
what is its
destination?
the lines
should be parallel
but they
meet
like lines
of music
in a score
amnesic she
leaves home
in a pitch
of intensity
a mood swing
in contrapuntal
tension
Really nice!
ReplyDeleteyes, lovely...!
ReplyDeletethis contrapuntal tension , yes.
ReplyDeleteI like it, Sue!
ReplyDeleteVery neat. All comes together wonderfully in the contrapuntal tension!
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