Damp grass a tide around this pyre
black sky flickers ember
communion of sky-most leaves
and raucous specks lava
floats the ground is hard under us
harder than we expected
eyes concede to glow crepitation
mesmeric and air is
neither cool nor warm
just a bit further creek
traces the fracture
of valley the very crease
between the up and the down
the line of begin and end
asbestos boats
ReplyDeleteyes, it'd have to be!
DeleteI think, regarding changes, one would be to change the last two lines to
ReplyDeletebetween the down and the up
the line of end and begin
?