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the
shining
this
is the weather
and
wallabies come
they
are lifted in mist
and
hear the creek run
a
few acres do
now
charging
swampies
splash ponding
they
invent the first game
could
do it every day
fence
through light falls
then
everything half rhymes
crooked
in its coming still
you'll
see the next door cattle
graze
up on gum leaves
must
be mistaken
then
maidenhair
cabbage
tree
ferns
here to fish
I'm
dry
now
sight the dust inside
consider
a fire for the night
drunk
on acres
shrunk
in the wash
the
shining's in the bark
fresh
lick
now
charging
with
heart leap thrills
of
my own round track
and
ho to the fruit ripe
last
pumpkins still umbilical
but
vines won't get away now
it's
so many minutes past some hour or other
or
could be leaning to
this
is the weather
and
wallabies come
they
are lifted in mist
and
hear the creek run
it's
stretch forward
and
all salute
gold
falls over the land
nobody
promised this
then
a chimney takes up smoke
I'm
here and I'd rather be here
I read it up from the last line to the first one as well, works in reverse - fantastic!
ReplyDeleteinteresting idea !
ReplyDeleteI'll re-post following this idea ... maybe with a little variation
ReplyDeleteYes; I just read it in reverse too. Works wonderfully that way particularly the (new) start stanza. A really evocative way to get the reader engaged.
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