Wednesday, June 20, 2018

Kit Kelen #902 - the shining



902
the shining

this is the weather
and wallabies come
they are lifted in mist
and hear the creek run

a few acres do

now charging

swampies splash ponding
they invent the first game
could do it every day

fence through light falls
then everything half rhymes
crooked in its coming still

you'll see the next door cattle
graze up on gum leaves
must be mistaken

then maidenhair
cabbage tree
ferns here to fish

I'm dry
now sight the dust inside

consider a fire for the night

drunk on acres
shrunk in the wash

the shining's in the bark
fresh lick

now charging

with heart leap thrills
of my own round track

and ho to the fruit ripe
last pumpkins still umbilical
but vines won't get away now

it's so many minutes past some hour or other
or could be leaning to

this is the weather
and wallabies come
they are lifted in mist
and hear the creek run

it's stretch forward
and all salute

gold falls over the land

nobody promised this

then a chimney takes up smoke

I'm here and I'd rather be here

4 comments:

  1. I read it up from the last line to the first one as well, works in reverse - fantastic!

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  2. I'll re-post following this idea ... maybe with a little variation

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  3. Yes; I just read it in reverse too. Works wonderfully that way particularly the (new) start stanza. A really evocative way to get the reader engaged.

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