Friday, November 4, 2016

Carolyn van Langenberg - #14 - spine bill

Spine bill

and then there's nature's rapprochement
 - the spine bill swoops,
darts above my shoulder
as if breath
startles my ear lobe

5 comments:

  1. Something went wrong and I can't delete or change the layout.

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  2. Thanks. Looks acceptable. I had the last line this way - as if breath startles my ear lobe.

    But something is not behaving. I experimented with horse, which collpased into solid prose that I am happy with.

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  3. Found it!

    and then there's nature's rapprochement -

    the spine bill swoops,

    darts above my shoulder as if

    breath startles my ear lobe.

    ReplyDelete

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