Monday, December 5, 2016

Lizz Murphy - Poem 339: on her own ... (haiku)




on her own now
she grows moons breathes
rose scent

 

2 comments:

  1. on her own now
    she grows moons breathes
    rose scent

    Interesting work here, Lizz. I have trouble pronouncing the middle line. Is there a typo there by any chance?

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  2. Thanks Myron. Nope. Try a comma or a semi-colon or an extra space ... after 'moons' :)

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