Monday, December 12, 2016

Robert Verdon, #384, earth astronomy



two trees, identical, but for

one leaf


two trees, green as the

edge of window glass


two trees, identical, but for

a cricket trilling

 



5 comments:

  1. glad you like it Efi; I fiddled and fiddled with it but didn't feel happy with it — I think it's ok now!

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  2. I really like it, Robbie, but I seem to remember it was longer. For what it's worth...and it's a terrific theme...I would intersperse couplets between the 2 trees :)

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  3. thanks, Rob, I shortened it in a moment of self-doubt but maybe that was unwise? will look into your suggestion.

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