Tuesday, October 18, 2016

Susan Hawthorne #291 dark moons

DP 291 dark moons

there's a lambda moon circling Uranus
and a girl gang made up of
Bianca Cressida Desdemona Juliet
Ophelia Cordelia in the inner ring

in the outer gang is Mab Miranda
Perdita Belinda Rosalind and the
eternal go-between Portia some
so dark they can be seen only by
their wobble their gravitas


  1. Nice, Susan, this looks to me like it could be the start of something bigger ...

    1. It is David. Writing in fragments for the time being and hope to gather a few more.

  2. Like this a lot. Last couple of lines powerful.


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