Thursday, January 19, 2017

Kit Kelen #381 - a list of things for which we're still looking


381
a list of things for which we're still looking

Soul
God
Truth
The Good
Nation
Paradise

everything with capital letters!

all of them thinner than air we can't see
but we can be certain exists

and some of these things will warm the heart
and all of them can kill you
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  1. Claine KeilyJanuary 19, 2017 at 10:29 PM

    Yes 'all of them can kill you'. I like that part.

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  2. Rob SchackneJanuary 20, 2017 at 5:17 AM

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  3. Rob SchackneJanuary 20, 2017 at 5:36 AM

    "everything with capital letters!" - unnecessary?

    "but we can be certain exists" Maybe best: "but all we can be certain will exist"?

    Rare that you have a poem here that is less than 50 lines...getting rid of the superfluous?

    Back in my box now. :)

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