lovely, Robbie!
glad you like it Efi; I fiddled and fiddled with it but didn't feel happy with it — I think it's ok now!
I really like it, Robbie, but I seem to remember it was longer. For what it's worth...and it's a terrific theme...I would intersperse couplets between the 2 trees :)
thanks, Rob, I shortened it in a moment of self-doubt but maybe that was unwise? will look into your suggestion.
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lovely, Robbie!
ReplyDeleteglad you like it Efi; I fiddled and fiddled with it but didn't feel happy with it — I think it's ok now!
ReplyDeleteI really like it, Robbie, but I seem to remember it was longer. For what it's worth...and it's a terrific theme...I would intersperse couplets between the 2 trees :)
ReplyDeletethanks, Rob, I shortened it in a moment of self-doubt but maybe that was unwise? will look into your suggestion.
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