I love this, Claine. So powerful. :)
Thanks Rob, I have not read your work yet but I look forward to it.
Unsettling - I like it a lot. Welcome back Claine.
Thanks Liz, I look forward to reading your poems.
Yay! She's back! Rob and Liz said it - powerful and unsettling. The Claine we know and love. :)
Hi Efi, it is good to be contributing again. I have missed the interactions with you and the other poets here. Thanks to all for the feedback. I was unsure about the poem, but I did speak the truth of the situation so I hope that came through. I feel a bit out of practice at the moment after not writing for many months x
Hi Claine, good to be with you again. Powerful poem.
Thanks so much for your feedback Sarah. It is hard to write a poem about not being able to communicate with the one woman I feel I should be most able to!
Love it Claine but I have to say I feel the lines 'a mother / otherworld' are unnecessary.
I was wondering about that. I did not want the poem to be too obscure. I will take them out.
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