Saturday, July 1, 2017

Rob Schackne #380 - "Umbrella ready"


Umbrella ready
thunderstorm just begun
the sound of a train
get off where you have to
within you without you
50 years ago today
and life goes on
the space between us
we were talking
this rain so serious
how long will it be water
but love to the very end
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  1. Kristen de KlineJuly 1, 2017 at 6:27 PM

    Ah Rob - another beauty! ... but love to the very end - your ending might well be the start of my next poem :)

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    1. Rob SchackneJuly 2, 2017 at 1:24 AM

      Dear Kristen, Little poem is expanded. In the direction it was intended. The amplification urge can strike at any time. Sometimes it strikes here. Lord. But I hope a little beauty for you remains in it.

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  2. AnonymousJuly 2, 2017 at 10:42 AM

    Lovely stuff Rob

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