Saturday, April 29, 2017

Rob Schackne #317 - Jupiter Tonight

Jupiter Tonight


Jupiter tonight
explain light rip
slowly accrete 
with the years
a perfection

or its potential
young I thought
seconds passed
a bank of girls
a school of fishes
rush comes home
then goes out 
a certain flower 
from the past
gathered like
the four moons
collecting love
it was perfect

2 comments:

  1. Rob, love the playfulness of Jupiter Tonight - the bank of girls and school of fishes - perfection indeed (or its potential?)

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    1. You are kind dear Kristen
      it is a poem on the verge
      probably playfully
      irresponsible

      :)

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