Greetings 365 +1! Robbie Coburn and I are very excited to be here. We will generally be posting on alternate days, using our time on the blog to collaborate on a series of 'call and response' poems. To kick things off we have "Calvary", an original poem by Robbie, plus my response, "Our Land of Sorrows", a poem I 'found' within his.
Calvary
(Robbie Coburn)
I can map the length of my history.
watching the clear liquid shrink itself
before beginning to pool in the base of the glass.
If I stare into it long enough the images can fracture —
replace what once again
eases back across my tongue.
Our Land of Sorrows
(Michele Seminara)
History is beginning
to pool upon itself.
The length of my stare
is long enough to fracture.
Again the map of my tongue
shrinks back to its base.
Again, the glass is clear.
Wonderful collaboration! Welcome to the blog, Michele and Robbie.
ReplyDeleteThank you Myron! Much appreciated.
Deletea nice one; I'm looking forward to your work!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Efi!
Deletevery intriguing way of work and nice opener. Welcome!
ReplyDeleteMany thanks!
DeleteWelcome, Michele and Robbie!
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