Wednesday, May 4, 2016

Susan Hawthorne #125 palindromic poem

in Sanskrit a poet can write
a palindromic poem of eight
lines readable horizontally
and vertically a poet can also
write lines that can be read
forwards and backwards, or
lines in which word breaks
change meanings of the syntax

सकारनानारकास-
कायसाददसायका
रसाहवा वाहसार-
नादवाददवादना.
(नादवाददवादना
रसाहवावाहसार
कायसाददसायका
सकारनानारकास)

sa-kA-ra-nA-nA-ra-kA-sa-
kA-ya-sA-da-da-sA-ya-kA
ra-sA-ha-vA vA-ha-sA-ra-
nA-da-vA-da-da-vA-da-nA.
(nA da vA da da vA da nA
ra sA ha vA vA ha sA ra
kA ya sA da da sA ya kA
sa kA ra nA nA ra kA sa)


you can’t do this in English
the vowels are too rare
consonants too concentrated
our roots all over the place
the palace is full of roots
concentrate congeals the floor
the mare’s jowls are too long
English words just won’t do it





7 comments:

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    1. Sanskrit is a language influential to so many existing languages. My native language, Capampangan on Luzon Island, the Philippines, has Sanskrit as one of its biggest sources, along with Chinese and Spanish. Most South-east and South Asian Languages are based on Sanskrit.

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    2. That's one of the reasons why I started learning Sanskrit. It is hugely challenging.

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  2. I like the information this poem gives me. Thank you.

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  3. fascinating, Susan. My mind boggles at the thought of how much suppleness a language can produce...

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  4. Efi, there is much more possible in Sanskrit poetry. But most of it is thoroughly untranslatable. It's like looking at a work of conceptual art. Perhaps another poem in that thought!!

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