Something went wrong and I can't delete or change the layout.
how's it look now?
Thanks. Looks acceptable. I had the last line this way - as if breath startles my ear lobe.But something is not behaving. I experimented with horse, which collpased into solid prose that I am happy with.
Found it!and then there's nature's rapprochement -the spine bill swoops, darts above my shoulder as if breath startles my ear lobe.
so how is it now?
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