You return from
your primordial home
full of it, all the
shit
you gainfully deployed your best
to keep me from
Still its tension in you
socks me
in my open gut
balls there like
constipation
and shakes and
shivers me
as some of it
comes back out fighting
great writing - I enjoy your poems, heaps!
ReplyDeleteThank you Efi! I'm finding this one a day a challenge as life is busy, but it's great reading other people's work and getting feedback.
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