:) Hi Myron, a small group of the walking wounded I saw last night - one limping, one walking, the other in a wheelchair (broken foot I think) - all looked like they were heading for a fresh accident as they were inattentive to the traffic around them while texting. In addition, the last line constructs a narrative of an accidental ankle roll, for example, that is being texted while it's happening....Hmm, might need a longer form to convey all this?
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Hi Efi. The last line of this tiny poem puzzles me. What does it mean? It's a bit of a tongue twister isn't it?
:) Hi Myron, a small group of the walking wounded I saw last night - one limping, one walking, the other in a wheelchair (broken foot I think) - all looked like they were heading for a fresh accident as they were inattentive to the traffic around them while texting. In addition, the last line constructs a narrative of an accidental ankle roll, for example, that is being texted while it's happening....Hmm, might need a longer form to convey all this?
ReplyDeleteAgree with Myron, Efi and yes maybe expansion is the wy to go because I found what you said in your comment pertinent.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Coral! I appreciate it.
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