Sunday, April 10, 2016

Mikaela Castledine #101 The Shirts of Edgar Aged 26

The shirts of Edgar aged 26
(The hands of Violet Elsie aged 40 if the truth were known)

Perhaps it starts with the shirts
the three shirts all so badly made by his mother and sisters
big enough for two large men to walk abreast
long enough for a night shirt
such a trial for a young man already so ill fitting in his own skin
Violet Elsie can hardly bear to look at him
all tufts of hair and skin emerging
from volumes of the stiffest white shirting

Violet Elsie is a seamstress of very high regard
she can turn a man’s shirt in an afternoon and so she does
chopping them into almost twice the number all beautifully resewn
such a puzzle it must be
for his family to see him dressed in such quality 
and the quantity bewildering
for neither Edgar nor Violet Elsie ever told them
where the extra shirts had came from

And so Edgar is in her debt
which is where she likes to keep people
and with such an intimate favour
the shirts her hands have made daily touching his very skin
her strange relationship with Edgar begins

This is a small piece of family folklore, taken from a short story called 'Ruff and Honours', which I am planning to use as inspiration for a work of art. Working it into a poem seemed the best way to transmit it from one medium to another.



4 comments:

  1. this made me smile, a lot! terrific

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  2. I don't want this beginning to end! I just want to know more, the middle and the end too or the never ending of it. This is a temptation of a poem /story, a tantalising feel, the threads of a shirt on skin, now I want the skin!

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  3. Fabulous. This needs to be a verse novel Mikaela!

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  4. Thank you! I will work out how to send you the short story tomorrow.

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