Saturday, November 12, 2016

Mikaela Castledine #315 Now we are gone from the sea

Now we are gone from the sea
the quiet of earth
just settling
is the background sound
for birdsong to flute against


  1. a lovely, elegant poem- the first line/title is particularly stunning. The sibilant pullback of a wave is still at work as an undercurrent...I love how you are gone from the sea but the sea is not gone from you...beautifully and simply done


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