Saturday, November 12, 2016

Mikaela Castledine #315 Now we are gone from the sea

Now we are gone from the sea
the quiet of earth
just settling
is the background sound
for birdsong to flute against

2 comments:

  1. a lovely, elegant poem- the first line/title is particularly stunning. The sibilant pullback of a wave is still at work as an undercurrent...I love how you are gone from the sea but the sea is not gone from you...beautifully and simply done

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