Thursday, November 3, 2016

Red Cone(LF)#275- Rudely


rudely

halfway through he said
the screaming drill
not good for the head
more holes in the wall
without consultation
without permission
he carries on
roll over
sit quietly
the world's gone rude
whatever

3 comments:

  1. The tenses have gone awry in this draft. Is that deliberate?

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  2. Yes. Deliberate attempt at going awry. Maybe it failed!

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