Friday, November 24, 2017

Rob Schackne #527 - "The semifactual experiment" (2)


The semifactual experiment
(how the poem doesn't spare you)
e.g. if he'd fallen to the right
instead of the left and hit his head
would he still have scored an own-goal

or woken up one morning from the coma
is critical in criminal sportswriting.

In the hospital. Always nasty.
People dying. Don't try it.


4 comments:

  1. Ah, but he net is always waiting. Wonderful.

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    1. You are kind, James. Just a little meditation on formal thinking. Then (I hope) a smooth entry.

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  2. if he'd dressed to the left...
    if his fly were undone ...
    if his undies were still on the line

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    1. A night on the town
      of a very different sort
      right below the belt

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