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Moon over North Narooma, Christmas night, 2015 |
Beach Lullaby
when the night draws his great dark sails across the sky
you should be in bed
and so should I
when the stars spread their glowing grains of sand across the sky
you should be in bed
and so should I
when the breeze blows her salt sea breath across the sky
you should be in bed
and so should I
when the moon bobs her weathered white boat across the sky
you should be asleep
and so should I
© Melinda Smith 2016
(reworked from a 2007 draft, never published)
(reworked from a 2007 draft, never published)
Melinda, this is gorgeous and sweet and should be a picture book.
ReplyDeleteI always thought of it as a picture book so it's validating to hear that Anne. Which is why I have never published it - it didn't fit in any of my 'grown up' poetry books. Another project to kick off again perhaps..
DeleteThis is very beautiful but maybe needs one more line to round it off?
ReplyDeleteCharming. Love the layout. Agree very picture book.
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