Saturday, April 9, 2016

Melinda Smith #9 Beach Lullaby


Moon over North Narooma, Christmas night, 2015

Beach Lullaby


when the night draws his great dark sails across the sky
     you should be in bed
                                    and so should I

when the stars spread their glowing grains of sand across the sky
     you should be in bed
                                    and so should I

when the breeze blows her salt sea breath across the sky
     you should be in bed
                                    and so should I

when the moon bobs her weathered white boat across the sky
     you should be asleep
                                    and so should I



© Melinda Smith 2016
(reworked from a 2007 draft, never published)

4 comments:

  1. Melinda, this is gorgeous and sweet and should be a picture book.

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    1. I always thought of it as a picture book so it's validating to hear that Anne. Which is why I have never published it - it didn't fit in any of my 'grown up' poetry books. Another project to kick off again perhaps..

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  2. This is very beautiful but maybe needs one more line to round it off?

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  3. Charming. Love the layout. Agree very picture book.

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