I turn around and see
I turn around and see
a man skipping stones
each touch sets off
concentric ripples
some stones reach the other shore
others sink into the river
one and another old friends passed away
the dusk’s sun seems heavier each day
weighs on the mind’s space and time
becomes a pupil
that sucks light in
I save up all that I forgot
put my shoulder to the wheel
it presses on my back
a bit more each day
until it becomes a hump
when I’m old
I seem to hear someone call out my name
the hump sets off echoes
that come back to it
I will still remember you once said
one can’t walk through the same street
twice
the more eyelids weigh
the more pupils are covered
the mind’s eye won’t open until it closes
I find the candle flame could lose a lump
I find I was the hump
I find I was the river
I turn around, only to see myself
Nice the way the ripple idea harnesses the emotive
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely poem with a beautiful sense of melancholy.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Danny. I hope it doesn't overkill. Haha...
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