Sunday, September 18, 2016

Chrysogonus #49 - storm in Macao (1)

the storm whips up
the temple pond
the tortoise sleeps right through

badai meransak 
kolam di kuil 
kura-kura masih terlelap

3 comments:

  1. Lovely moment to carry around inside a poem.

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  2. Beautiful. I love that the tortoise sleeps.

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  3. These are a lovely group of poems to describe the storm. Nice use of the tortoise, batten down the hatches!

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