Saturday, September 24, 2016

Chrysogonus #54 - first of autumn

first of autumn 

last step 
from the pier
into the sea
and a scatter of leaves
one could swim in
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5 comments:

  1. ACskiSeptember 25, 2016 at 7:07 AM

    nice stuff. This form leads to delicate observations that hint at something else.

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  2. Efi HatzimanolisSeptember 25, 2016 at 8:02 AM

    yes, it is simply beautiful Chrys

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  3. Rob SchackneSeptember 25, 2016 at 3:34 PM

    Perfect.

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  4. Susan HawthorneSeptember 25, 2016 at 6:20 PM

    Simple in the best way, it spreads like ripples in water.

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    1. Susan HawthorneSeptember 25, 2016 at 6:21 PM

      Sorry to be so slow to comment, after my big deadline I fell sick. Cottonwool brain!

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