Monday, September 19, 2016

Rob Schackne #79 - By Charlotte At The Riverside

By Charlotte At The Riverside

There I was again in the evening air
As though all my rivers kept flowing past
(Maybe I never left the little boat at all)
One half then, a bit now, almost half a future
At times there will be someone missing
There’s no gentle hand to warm the chills
Even if the old wind carries familiar smells
Later in the autumn breeze, after tying up
My river skiff, after I get out to walk home
(Sun due to set, every tomorrow’s on its way)
Ghosts I speak with will have such cold breath
They say it once, they’ll say it again, half-counsel
Starting, starting over means giving up so much.


7 comments:

  1. starting over means giving up so much.... so true! Nice poem and deep meaning!

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  2. So beautiful, so poignant, but I guess giving it up is the platform that gets us to the starting point again.

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  3. Thanks to you both...and to the setting sun on the poignant weight of the world :)

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  4. I very much like the ghosts with their cold repetitive breath. Lovely poem.

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