Thursday, September 15, 2016

Susan Hawthorne #258 the silent ones


they do not see them
nor hear them
for they disappear with the landscape

two old women one young man
three younger women and several children
they feel the horses approach
disappear into grass and trees

the horses and men stop    camp
in morning light the men urinate
the smell is strong
one walks further catches a glimpse of child

they come in a pack from all directions
gathering them
except for one old woman
the people do not resist and seem unable to speak

they do speak with hands feet
and silent mouths shaping lips
the men are puzzled don't understand
failure to resist

when one reaches for a woman
a bloodcurdling cry comes from the trees
they pause what to do in the face of silence
cut by such a cry

one man reaches for his gun
he is stopped by another
and while their attention is taken
the small group vanishes as silently as before

they cannot see them
nor hear them
for they have disappeared into the landscape

5 comments:

  1. Wow...that's volumes in eight stanzas. powerful subcurrents and haunting.

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  2. Wow...that's volumes in eight stanzas. powerful subcurrents and haunting.

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  3. Makes me think of some Apache tales .... powerful poem Susan!

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  4. Thanks for your comments. No known cultures are featured here. But interesting that you are reminded Beatrice.

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