Monday, May 9, 2016

9.5.16 (#128) rain by Myron Lysenko

rain
against the window
cyclist



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  1. Lizz Murphy PoetMay 10, 2016 at 10:24 PM

    Ho - love that pivotal middle line!

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    1. Myron LysenkoMay 11, 2016 at 9:29 AM

      Ta Lizz. Yes, I like the technique of the pivot in haiku. I find myself doing it so often because a haiku usually needs a setting.

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