Tuesday, May 10, 2016

burke: HAIKU #132

after last night's storm
white rose petals on
a flywire door
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1 comment:

  1. Myron LysenkoMay 10, 2016 at 11:05 AM

    I like this one very much, Andrew.

    You could even make it more immediate and metaphorically resonant:

    late night storm
    the white rose petals
    on a flywire door

    I hope you don't mind me offering this suggestion.



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