Sunday, January 15, 2017

Red Cone(LF)343-tractor


seems like a tractor is next door
the sound
the noise
no body
sound without a body
a ghost
the solid
remains
a long way off

4 comments:

  1. reminds me of that scene at the beginning of Grapes of Wrath where the man becomes the machine through the tractor -- Steinbeck's finest rendition of alienation

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    1. I haven't rad Steinbeck for decades but now that you mention it, it does ring a bell!
      I like that...

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  2. A lovely moment. Did you really capture it? Me, I'd like it to go on. A bit ghostly! How, where, when, why :)

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    1. Thank you! I did try to capture the moment in the country. Also it was longer but I edited it heavily. I will try and write a longer piece one day.....I like the suggestion of how, where ,when, why...

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