Robert Verdon, #415, last sunrise
my
room is stifling as a wrestler’s armpit
muddy
murmur of earth of earth
graveyard
by the sea of electric currents and lost rivers
here
lies the city of waxing crystal
full
fathom five
time
papered over time
muddy
memorial, ruin of shadows
rumble
in the walls — no quake, not wind, taut sail snaps
blues
writhing in every filigreed mast and branch
birds
with tears of joy carol here lay one whose name
was writ in water
hope
or Roman holiday along every grey lane
water
(not ice) now legible, cycling to Babylon, bearing stripes and a
cross
the
workers’ flag is deepest red
shimmer
in the meniscus of the world ocean
no
more fixed than a star
paratactic
as
red fingers in dough
plush
room air
heavy with scented powder
named
by a pantomime of thunderheads
petrified
skeleton tree against the last sunrise
Great poem, mate. Question (1): I must be dense, but if "sprouts" is (I imagine) being employed as a verb here, what's the subject? Question (2): notwithstanding the answer to (1), do you think the last sprout is necessary?
ReplyDeletethe 'petrified skeleton tree' sprouts; maybe it is a bit supernumerary, will look at it when I am a bit more compos mentis!
Deleteo christmas tree!
ReplyDeletegreat flow here
it cries out to be read out
Thanks Kit — BTW, what is happening to Project 366? What of Project 52? (Just emerging from post-Xmas haze here.)
Deletewow! I love it! and I agree with Rob, the last sprout seems unecessary to me as well
ReplyDeleteok, will 'de-sprout'! :)
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