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become
your own hobby 
who
was it I hoped to be?
pottering
these late last years 
mourning
time lost 
to
serious affairs 
then
the river I stepped in 
ran
off 
ran
dry 
ran
toxic blooms
when
did this begin to worry me?
the
truth makes yet another attempt 
as
a matter of fact it's with us right now 
sit
still 
for
beginner's mind 
then
it's like 
hearing
your own voice
after
your death 
strange
rasping 
but
sweet 
and
then you won't know it 
see
how relentless you were 
all
your days 
like
a cheer rung 
till
here you are – 
the echo 
 
A very raw and try poem. This one makes me wonder if all is well with your health. I hope so as the poems you have been writing as of late are filled with an ever increasing sense of mortality.
ReplyDeletewhat is raw and try, Claine?
ReplyDeleteI recommend giving up the intentional fallacy...
my work does not reflect my health, or not particularly or generally
Not sure what word I meant to type now but 'try' was not it! Okay I will take a different approach to reading your work.
DeleteThe word I meant to type was 'true'.
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