Earthbound:
it's the cover of the book
that gets you in
a half torso of the man
who fell to earth
upper arms stretched high
over his face, body
splayed
across a surface (concrete? tarmac?)
an outline, blurred
etched in grey
ink tracing his limbs
like chalk ashes
at a crime scene
then there's the leaves, gliding
d
o
w
n
from the sky
caressing his body
showering him in a bed of red rose petals
as if he's walked out of a crime scene
and floated into the set of American Beauty
what's with the leaves
are they burying
his body
or kissing him
what's with the leaves
*like*, terrific ending too, Kristen
ReplyDeleteYes. There is terrific balance here. I love it.
ReplyDeleteP.S. What's with this: "across a surface (concrete? tarmac?)" You don't recognise it? Covered by the leaves? Or you're unsure?
Thanks Efi and Rob:). Rob, I like a bit of ambiguity and lack of clarity about some of the details so readers can put their own spin on it.
ReplyDeleteGot it. :)
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